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Your imagery is good, and the whole poem has great form; dark, yet elegant

As of yet, I have no plans to extend this story. I don't want to exhaust my characters or the story line, which I'm sure you all understand, but thank ...

Actually, the meter works for me. Okay, I know I'm just the writer, but if I change those words that don't exactly fit, I feel like I'm losing some of ...

Thank you all for the criticism, its very helpful. I'd just like to explain, though, that 'Libertys' was in reference to the Statue of Liberty. I hope that dispells the ...

I was trying to say that they are blind and unfeeling tourists.

I really appreciate the criticism :D I hope to have these stories published someday so it really helps. And actually, um...Memarou isn't deaf :? :shock: it just isn't very easy ...

Thanks! I was thinking of expanding it for the story

Hillarious! I've never seen Life of Brian, but I know the basic plot and that was great! Which Grail Parody did you mean, because I wrote one a while ago ...

I've seen the rest of his books at Borders :evil: But you could probably special order them from any bookstore.

Definetly! Have you read his other books as well?

It was good. Especially liked the part about Beren and Luthien. Have you read it before?

Another Thomas Hardy novel and a good read. I'd read Far From the Madding Crowd first though because this book is tragic. I just finished it. It's sad, but very ...

That's a very good start. I love the movie and I always tried to picture what happened after it ended. I hope that you'll continue working on this.

Thanks for all the constructive criticisms. I wrote this during a writer's club exercise so I know it isn't great. I'll continue to rework it and edit it on the ...

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